Book Review 2-9 The Little Mermaid

There was beautiful sea long long far. There was a sea country of shell in this sea. This was mermaid king’s country. Many mermaids and many fish lived there. The sea country’s king had 6 daughters. 6 daughters were friend very much. They played around castle and sea garden everyday. Their grandmother said that over the sea. Mermaid can’t go over the sea only above 15 years old by mermaid’s law. 5 daughters already went over the sea, but the youngest of 6 children in the family didn’t go over the sea. The little mermaid was the best beautiful and curious. The little mermaid dreamed everyday.
The little mermaid became 15 years old yet. The little mermaid was exciting. The luxurious ship floated in the sea when the little mermaid took her face. Prince Milo of that country took it. People cerebrated Prince Milo’s birthday. Suddenly, a storm hit the ship. The ship shipwrecked. The little mermaid went to help hastily. Prince Milo has floated. The little mermaid took back offing Prince Milo. The little mermaid returned as shouldn’t have seen anyone.
The little mermaid couldn’t forget Prince Milo from this day. The little mermaid dreamed that want to marry and live with Prince Milo. 5 old sisters wanted to be agent for cute young sister. 5 old sisters found witch. Then the little mermaid went to witch. The witch gave magical drug. The witch said that one, can never return her home and meet her family, and two, she disappear if she can’t marry Prince Milo. The little mermaid accepted it.
The little mermaid became human and appeared front Prince Milo. Prince Milo was kind to and took good care of her. However Prince Milo didn’t notice that she was a lifesaver. How was she? Did she disappear?
I think very sad, but I respect that she carried out her love to Princes Milo. This story is great pure love ultimate. (324 words)